Monday, August 2, 2010

Homework for Writing Ms. Kristi.

Compare and contrast two different places you've lived.

Two years ago,I was lived in Detroit,now I lived in Dearborn Heights,here I would like tell you before any thing how I moved to Dearborn Heights,first is the City very nice and better than Detroit,the things that were the same is that I had to cut the grass the houses. Also the houses has 3 floors.the difference's is that Detroit was a dirty area and Dearborn Heights is very clean and nice people and much safer. Another difference is that my house in Dearborn Heights is bigger and even the neighbor hood is bigger then the house I lived in Detroit.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Aboud,
    Check your first few sentences. You need to break your sentences up with periods and not commas.

    --Kristi

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